劍橋雅思14Test4雅思寫作真題及范文解析

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　大家在備考雅思寫作的時(shí)候可以找一些真題去練習(xí)，然后對(duì)照范文，找到自己的不足之處加以改進(jìn)。下面小編給大家?guī)韯蜓潘?4test4寫作真題范文解析。

劍橋雅思14Test4雅思寫作Task1真題及范文解析

　　TEST 4

　　WRITING TASK 1

　　You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

　　The plans below show a pubic park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

　　Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

　　Write at least 150 words.

　　【答案解析】

　　這是一道地點(diǎn)變遷類地圖題，需要分析同一個(gè)公園在不同的時(shí)間(1920年和現(xiàn)在)的整體布局變化。地點(diǎn)變遷類地圖題的整體寫作順序?yàn)榈谝粡埖貓D按照?qǐng)D片內(nèi)容完整描述，從第二張圖片開始重點(diǎn)描述圖片之間的差異，即變化了的布局，沒有發(fā)生變化的內(nèi)容無需重點(diǎn)呈現(xiàn)。在這道題目中，整體分析順序?yàn)樽晕飨驏|(圖片從左往右)，在大方向一致的前提下，需要關(guān)注1920年公園的西邊(左邊)為環(huán)狀布局，音樂家演出臺(tái)被四周的觀眾坐席和玫瑰花園環(huán)繞。中部的同樣為對(duì)稱布局，噴泉的北邊和南邊是對(duì)應(yīng)的兩個(gè)入口。公園現(xiàn)在的布局中，類似的對(duì)稱結(jié)構(gòu)也可以在中部觀察到，玫瑰花園四周被座位環(huán)繞，北邊和南邊的入口不變。

　　The maps show changes in the layout of the Grange Park, which stands between the Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street in 1920 and today.

　　In 1920, a stage for musicians could be observed in the center of the western area, with two rose gardens built to its north and south respectively. There were both two seats areas facilitated on each side of the two rose gardens, surrounding the stage altogether. In the middle of the park, a fountain could be found, while two entrances on the Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street located to the north and south of the fountain. In the eastern area, another rose garden stood next to the entrance on the Arnold Avenue, opposing to a Glasshouse in the south. There was a pond for water plants standing in the northeastern corner of the park, next to which another seats area was founded.

　　At present, several changes have taken place. The stage for musician is transformed into an amphitheater for concerts, while four seats areas and the rose garden in the south are all moved to the center of the park, with four seats areas surrounding the garden. Another rose garden at the east of the entrance is changed into a café, while the pond for water plants is transformed into a children’s play area. A water feature area replaces the glasshouse in the southern direction. What is more, an entrance to the underground car park is established on the original site of seats next to the pond.

　　劍橋雅思14test4寫作task2范文解析：個(gè)體經(jīng)營的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)

　　WRITING TASK 2

　　You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

　　Write about the following topic:

　　Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization.

　　Why might this be the case?

　　What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

　　Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

　　Write at least 250 words.

　　【答案解析】

　　這是一道變體的問題解決類大作文。常規(guī)問題解決類大作文的出題形式為分析問題產(chǎn)生的原因以及提出相應(yīng)的解決方案，而這道題的寫作要去為分析現(xiàn)象出現(xiàn)的原因以及相應(yīng)的弊端，與常規(guī)問題解決類答題要求略有出入。但從題目本身而言，和問題解決類大作文相類似的地方是同樣不用給出具體個(gè)人對(duì)于現(xiàn)象本身的利弊判斷，因?yàn)轭}干中已經(jīng)替考生決定了論述的方向“自主經(jīng)營的弊端”，主體段按照兩段式劃分，一段分析為什么會(huì)出現(xiàn)越來越多的個(gè)體經(jīng)營，一段分析這個(gè)現(xiàn)象可能會(huì)產(chǎn)生的弊端即可。

　　主體段1：

　　1)對(duì)于個(gè)人自由和自主性的追求。

　　2)對(duì)于個(gè)人抱負(fù)的追求。

　　主體段2：

　　1)承受更大的壓力。

　　2)缺乏穩(wěn)定性。

　　【參考答案】

　　Contemporary working modes have been gigantically reshaped under reforms of traditional concepts as well as increased social demands. As can be prevalently witnessed in many cities, especially metropolises around the world, an increasing number of people are becoming self-employed. Both the causes and possible negative influences will be further discussed in following paragraphs.

　　Various reasons can contribute to the present situation. First and foremost, the pursuit of personal ambition and dream has motivated people to escape from the shackle of ordinary companies. In traditional working modes, employees have to strive really hard to climb the career hierarchy, while they may spend more than half of their life to improve their status. By being the employers of themselves, people can spare no efforts to realize their own dreams. What is more, with the awakening of democratic consciousness, people nowadays are more aware of the personal freedom. In such contexts, many of them would not like to be constrained by the routine commuting life, and would rather hold the decision-making power at hand. Hence being self-employed gradually becomes one of the most favorable choices for people who value personal freedom. Under the influences of aforementioned elements, the emergence of such a phenomenon is quite understandable.

　　In terms of the possible disadvantages, on the one hand, people who are self-employed may face certain periods of instability. Compared to regular companies and enterprises, the client resources of those individual employers are quite unsteady, since those individual employers should take more efforts to establish a convincing image and reputation. Once the shortage of incomes occurs, people who are self-employed will confront tougher times to survive. On the other hand, more pressure will be exerted on shoulders of those individual employers. In order to maintain the healthy operation of business, people who run their own companies should strive against all odds no matter in competing with rival companies or managing their own employees. As a result, they must undertake stresses they will never face when they are employed by large companies. Without proper mental and physical regulation, their health might be further hampered under such an intense state.

　　The causing effects of being self-employed are quite diverse and it is really significant for people who want to be self-employed to think twice before making this decision.

　　雅思詞匯：表達(dá)心情的英文詞有哪些

　　embarrassed尷尬

　　ashamed慚愧

　　flustered慌張

　　guilty內(nèi)疚

　　agony苦惱

　　heartbroken傷心

　　miserable悲慘

　　depressed沮喪

　　discouraged氣餒

　　melancholy憂郁

　　jealous嫉妒