托福獨(dú)立寫作難點(diǎn)以及解決方法
托福獨(dú)立寫作需要的是在眾多的詞匯積累中找到彼此之間的聯(lián)系，憑借語法的基本規(guī)則，進(jìn)而組成一篇邏輯完整的文章。那么在這整個(gè)過程中，考生會(huì)遇到哪些方面的問題呢?解決的思路又是怎樣的呢?
托福獨(dú)立寫作難點(diǎn)以及解決方法
首先，難點(diǎn)在于思路上。具體來說，在寫托福獨(dú)立作文的時(shí)候就相當(dāng)于一個(gè)小型的論文，需要確立一個(gè)論點(diǎn)，然后再需要兩三個(gè)論據(jù)對(duì)論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡釋。而往往很多考生在考試的時(shí)候，對(duì)于題目自己要說些什么是比較茫然的。因此在備戰(zhàn)托福獨(dú)立寫作的時(shí)候，先還得從思路上備戰(zhàn)起來。需要通過大量的訓(xùn)練從而達(dá)到對(duì)于任何一個(gè)話題都能夠想出相應(yīng)的論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)。
托福獨(dú)立寫作真題集錦里面有對(duì)各種話題進(jìn)行分類，主要分為了社會(huì)問題、教育問題、工作問題、交通問題等等，其實(shí)就可以根據(jù)這些話題進(jìn)行針對(duì)性的訓(xùn)練，目的就是為了思維的養(yǎng)成，然后總結(jié)出一些話題的應(yīng)對(duì)技巧。
就比如教育這個(gè)話題，就可以從對(duì)于學(xué)生能力的培養(yǎng)(專業(yè)知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備、學(xué)習(xí)能力、交流能力等等)、態(tài)度價(jià)值觀、與教師相關(guān)的問題、硬件設(shè)施和軟件設(shè)施等一系列延伸出來，自然不會(huì)因?yàn)椴恢勒f些什么而白白浪費(fèi)了大量的時(shí)間。
然后就是在行文邏輯上。思路都是一些零碎的點(diǎn)子，而邏輯是保證這些點(diǎn)子都能夠被系在一根繩子上，因此邏輯的重要性不言而喻。英語的表達(dá)方式不是像一般中文那樣的委婉含蓄娓娓道來，而需要的是嚴(yán)密表達(dá)邏輯。而且在托福獨(dú)立寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)上也有這么一個(gè)要求：well organized and well developed.簡(jiǎn)而言之就是邏輯清晰。
其實(shí)對(duì)于托福獨(dú)立寫作來說，邏輯上是有其固定的套路的，我們只要稍微變通一下就行了。
就比如，一篇文章可以被分為三個(gè)部分，就是闡明觀點(diǎn)、進(jìn)行論述、得出結(jié)論。闡明觀點(diǎn)與得出結(jié)論自不必說，在進(jìn)行論述的時(shí)候，只要能夠運(yùn)用一些連接詞如Firstly, Secondly, Admittedly， However等等這樣的詞，然后在其后緊跟每一句的主題句的話，基本上一條邏輯線就非常直觀地展現(xiàn)在了考官的面前。
很多托?？忌谶壿嬌习l(fā)揮不好，其實(shí)就是因?yàn)樵谡撌龅倪^程中，各主題句有所重復(fù)，各論據(jù)關(guān)系不明或者論據(jù)本身就很牽強(qiáng)等等。所以平常在練習(xí)寫作的時(shí)候，最好有一個(gè)可以給予知道的老師，給你提出一些客觀的批評(píng)建議。
最后其實(shí)還是在論述的這個(gè)過程中，關(guān)于例子的選擇的問題。很多考生都是局限于論述不全面，例子選擇不當(dāng)。
一般在論述的過程中，例子是非常關(guān)鍵性的一步，也是看你能不能報(bào)一件抽象的東西表達(dá)得更加具體。一般例子類型分為：個(gè)人例子、權(quán)威例子、科學(xué)依據(jù)。這些例子其實(shí)都是需要考生在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)過程中不斷積累的，所以平時(shí)就應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)搜集好各種素材例子，以備不時(shí)之需。
托?？荚囎魑?a href='http://www.zbfsgm.com/fwn/xiaqishi/' target='_blank'>范文:父母應(yīng)代替少年兒童作決定嗎
托?？荚囎魑念}目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
托福考試作文參考分析：
表明立場(chǎng)：這樣的做法有一定的道理。支持這樣的做法的理由：older teenage children還不夠成熟(immature)，考慮不夠周全(inconsiderate)，尤其涉及到經(jīng)濟(jì)相關(guān)的決定時(shí)，缺乏獨(dú)立承擔(dān)能力(incapable of being independent)。然而，“如何保證parents或者adult relatives所作的決定就是正確的”也是個(gè)問題。另外，總是把孩子排除在決定權(quán)之外，是否會(huì)使孩子變得“沒能力做出任何決定”?the ability to make sound decision是人生道路上很重要的能力之一。
托福考試作文范文參考：
The issue of whether parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their teenage children arouses much controversy among people with different perspectives and backgrounds. Some people believe the statement is legitimate, because children are not mature and have not enough experiences to determine the optimal choice. On the other hand, people claim that nobody can control other's life even their parents. People should be responsible for their own behaviors and determine their lives. As far as I am concerned, I would like to refute the former and support the latter. In the following discussing, I would like to address some evidence to substantiate my point of view.
In the first place, the most important reason for me to choose this position is that old teenagers have their own thoughts and ideas. The fact that the thoughts of children are not perfect and logical does not mean their parents have right to eliminate their decision without considering the children's intentions. In the era of rapid social and technological changes leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displacement, the good decision in parents' time would be out of data.
In the second place, the job of parents is not to make decision for their children, but to help them to choose. In this period of 15 to 18 year-old children, they are always radical. If their parents make decisions instead of themselves, they will not obey these decisions. Parents had better told their kids about their opinions, worries and experiences as friends. Give much more room for their kids to think and decide. Respect and believe their kids will choose the better one and will face the result directly.
In sum, considering the aforementioned reasons I support the statement that older teenagers had better make decisions by themselves. Admittedly, our parents are our best and most early teacher. They would give us more important advices to help us choose the best decision.
托?？荚囎魑姆段?改變學(xué)校
托?？荚囎魑姆段模篒f you could make one important change in a school that you attended, what change would you make? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
托福考試作文參考分析：
(1)提高效率;
(2)促進(jìn)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí);
(3)更好的老師和學(xué)生的交流。
托?？荚囎魑姆段膮⒖迹?/p>
Talking of making an important change in my school, I'd like to suggest that our education system put more emphasis on the development of learning skills and applications of theories into practice instead of simply learning knowledge from books. The proposal is based on the reasons as follows.
For one thing, overemphasis on academic learning poses a threat because of confusing the purpose of learning. As school credit is usually considered the major criteria of academic learning, in a credit-driven school, one may try hard to learn simply for learning's sake. In other words, college students tend to blindly cram their brains with numerous texts and formulas while do not have a clear idea of what they really want to learn, why they need to learn, not to mention how the things they are learning are useful to the reality. An example is way that common ESL students learn English: they may spend several years in reciting grammar rules, but can hardly utter an English word in front of a foreigner.
Another reason that causes me to make the suggestion is the requirement of today's ever-changing knowledge economy time. With the increasingly accelerated pace of information explosion, one can hardly depend on knowledge from books that he or she has learned at school. Mastering learning skills and knowing how to apply the skills into practice are becoming indispensable than ever before. A recent survey conducted by educator shows that most students in our country lack the ability of using tools and solving problems compared with their counterparts in the United States. This informs us to take a serious look at our book-knowledge based education pattern.
In sum, it's high time for us to give a touch on our education pattern concerning the narrowness of book knowledge learning as well as the necessity of practical learning required by the contemporary world.
托?？荚囎魑姆段?出國留學(xué)經(jīng)歷的利弊分析
托?？荚囎魑念}目：The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question:
You are planning to study abroad. What do you think you will like and dislike about this experience? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
托?？荚囎魑膮⒖挤治觯?/p>
本題要求考生通過定位，概括和分類仔細(xì)審題，就某個(gè)問題寫一篇感想，或就一個(gè)事件進(jìn)行闡述，解釋以及論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，列出提綱明確主題并圍繞主題來寫作和修改文章。
托?？荚囎魑姆段膮⒖迹?/p>
My mother once told me that she could always find my eyes shining at the mention of going abroad for further education. There is no denying the fact that I have strong desire of my oversea trip and have planed of it for a long period since I began my high school time. In fact, I am only a typical example of those young students who have the some dream. A result of recent survey, released by a famous magazine in my hometown showed that more than 72 percent local high school students has pleasant association with studying abroad. Anyway, such decisions can benefit a young man a great deal while it is not without its problems.
Will oversea colleges and universities, especially those in America, provide Chinese student a more refined education? The data I select over this year leads to me believe that the answer is undoubtedly positive, since those abroad universities, which enjoy high reputations world-widely, have faculty and advanced facility. It is the education with totally different conceptions that will exert positively influence on one by widening his or her horizon, whereby he/she can put him/herself in a favorable position in the future job markets.
Secondly, which is another conspicuous advantage of the oversea life, it can bring one friends from a variety of countries. Seldom can one have an adjust judgement to a remote nation without consorting with the people from that area. As my cousin, who has been living in England for over seven years, pointed out, she learns a lot from her foreign friends.
However, we immature students should be blind to the dilemma we may face toward in the future. Living in a foreign country means one should try hard to adapt him/herself to a new environment and, in addition, probably have to suffer from the segregation with family.
After the both sides of abroad life are viewed, it is time to draw my conclusion. In short, the study in a foreign university will be a precious experience to a young man as long as he/she can overcome the difficulty he/she may encounter.
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