托福寫作句型總結(jié)升級(jí)版
為了幫助大家寫好托福作文,小編在這里給你們總結(jié)了一些句型,希望對(duì)大家有幫助。
托福寫作句型總結(jié)1
1)使用同義詞。
比如以下的一些寫作高頻詞匯的同義詞,這些詞出現(xiàn)的尤為頻繁。要學(xué)會(huì)用同義詞來(lái)替換它們。
在綜合寫作中教授說(shuō)話不能總是用think,還可以用believe, consider, deem, figure out。在托福獨(dú)立寫作中表示近來(lái)的時(shí)間狀況用nowadays,還可以用recently, currently, at present, in recent years, these days
再比如表示重要的詞有important,一篇文章如果要求描寫某物重要,不能只寫important這一個(gè)詞吧,和它類似的還有necessary, crucial, essential, vital, significant , indispensable, momentous, 如果還需要再變化,就可以用下面的改變?cè)~性的方法。
2)改變?cè)~性。
n.→ Adj. 比如:important改成be of importance
n. → v. When we look at a comparison between A and B…
When we compare A and B…
Adj. → n.
There are a variety of solutions to the problem.
There are various solutions to the problem.
3)更換使用不同的承接詞。承接詞不僅連接段落和段落,還連接句子和句子。熟識(shí)一些常用的承接詞對(duì)寫作將會(huì)有極大的作用。
because of → due to, owing to, because, as, since, for
but → however, nevertheless, nonetheless, whereas
so → therefore, hence, thus, consequently
4)形容詞的逆向表達(dá)。在某些形容詞上進(jìn)行修改,會(huì)達(dá)到非比尋常的效果。
Eg: not as easy as…→more difficult than…
Not uncommon→common
The cheapest → the least expensive
其次,是句型的使用。在新托福寫作部分,評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中非常重要的一項(xiàng)就是句型結(jié)構(gòu),要求句型結(jié)構(gòu)做到豐富多變。例如下面的典型美句,就可以讓你的文章加分:
1)it句
It is delightful to have friends from distant lands.
It is undeniable that…
It is obvious that…
2)雙否句
it is by no means uncommon to find…
…never fails to …
3)倒裝句
So severe is this problem that we have no alternative but to take some feasible measures to deal with it.
Only through education can we rise in the world.
此外,美國(guó)人的另一特點(diǎn)就是注重具體內(nèi)容。即要求我們寫的作文具體化。新托福寫作的宗旨在于communicating information。中文經(jīng)過(guò)長(zhǎng)久的發(fā)展,追求的是含蓄、抽象,用最少的話來(lái)表達(dá)深刻的思想,但美國(guó)人思維卻是具體的。如果按照中國(guó)人思維寫作,美國(guó)人會(huì)無(wú)法領(lǐng)會(huì),我們的托福作文也就只能得低分。
美國(guó)人托福思維還體現(xiàn)在綜合寫作中。綜合寫作中的閱讀部分就是這種思維,聽力和閱讀結(jié)構(gòu)相似,而內(nèi)容相反??梢姡灰覀兡軌蜃龅接妹绹?guó)人的思維、結(jié)構(gòu)看問(wèn)題,搭出大骨架,從生活中選取豐富的素材使之具體、豐滿,再輔之以閃光的詞匯句型、修辭手法,要拿新托福寫作高分就不再是遙不可及的夢(mèng)想。
托福寫作句型總結(jié)2
我們首先來(lái)欣賞一下美國(guó)的約翰·F·肯尼迪總統(tǒng)所說(shuō)過(guò)的一段話:
Let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe to assure the survival and success of liberty.
這段文字中,所有動(dòng)詞和賓語(yǔ)的形式都是一致的,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔而有力度。
這種將兩個(gè)或者兩個(gè)以上的成分用相同的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)中稱為平行結(jié)構(gòu)(Parallelism)。這種結(jié)構(gòu)不但結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,而且語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美,甚至可以包含豐富的情感和風(fēng)格,不但在演說(shuō)中經(jīng)常使用,而且在任何英文考試中,都可以成為提高句子質(zhì)量和表達(dá)水平的終極武器。相反,有些同學(xué)的句子很長(zhǎng),使用了從句、非謂語(yǔ)等各種復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法,如果結(jié)構(gòu)松散,讓人難以理清頭緒,也不會(huì)被考官視為優(yōu)質(zhì)句子。
其實(shí)絕大多數(shù)中國(guó)學(xué)生其實(shí)都不擅長(zhǎng)寫平行句式,這是完全可以理解的。
畢竟除了詩(shī)歌和對(duì)聯(lián),中文在大多數(shù)情況下都對(duì)結(jié)構(gòu)是否平行沒有特殊要求,我們依照松散的中文句子翻譯出來(lái)的英文也就很難做到平行了。
" 高校企業(yè)參與了這個(gè)神器的新工具的創(chuàng)造,確保了它的融資,并花費(fèi)時(shí)間時(shí)產(chǎn)品投放市場(chǎng)。" 從中文的角度,幾乎是沒有毛病的。
但是直接翻譯成英文可能就變成了這個(gè)樣子:The high school entrepreneur was involved in the creation of a new miracle tool, secured financing for it, and spent time getting the product to market. 這個(gè)句子中,"創(chuàng)造"、"融資"和"推廣" 都是由學(xué)校這個(gè)主體發(fā)出,最終對(duì)象都是 "新工具" 的動(dòng)作。
因此我們可以將它改成這樣的平行結(jié)構(gòu):The high school entrepreneur created, financed, and marketed the new miracle tool. 這個(gè)句子的修改過(guò)程,首先是要有意識(shí)地使用平行結(jié)構(gòu),其次是在中文上就對(duì)語(yǔ)序作出調(diào)整,最后是明確可以并列的成分,也就是動(dòng)詞。
除了以上的動(dòng)詞,介詞、連詞和冠詞也經(jīng)常能引導(dǎo)平行成分。
我們常用的both ... and、either ... or、neither ... nor和not only ... but also也可以用來(lái)連接平行結(jié)構(gòu),使用時(shí)要特別注意前后的結(jié)構(gòu)是否完全平行。
接下來(lái)讓我們一起用幾個(gè)句子改錯(cuò)來(lái)練平行結(jié)構(gòu):
1、 許多年從業(yè)人員面臨兩難問(wèn)題;工作時(shí)為了金錢還是樂趣?
原句:A dilemma facing many young professionals is whether to work for money or work for enjoyment.
平行版:A dilemma facing many young professionals is whether to work for money or to work for enjoyment.
2、這對(duì)于勝利者和那些輸?shù)舻娜藖?lái)說(shuō)都是一個(gè)問(wèn)題。
原句:This could be a problem for both the winners and those who lose.
平行版:This could be a problem for both the winners and the losers.
3、奧林匹克志愿者們做好準(zhǔn)備、完全有能力、下定決心圓滿完成任務(wù)。
原句:Olympic volunteers were ready, filly able, and were quite determined to do a great job.
平行版:Olympic volunteers were ready, able, and determined to do a great job.
4、學(xué)生可以登陸Facebook,花時(shí)間閱讀郵件,瀏覽一些博客推送,然后開心地發(fā)微博。
原句:Students can log onto Facebook, spend time reading email messages, review some blog posts, and then tweet with joy.
平行版:Students can check Facebook, read email messages, review blog posts, and then joyfully send tweets.
以上基本的平行結(jié)構(gòu)大家是否都掌握了呢?
在托福作文中,有很多可以使用平行結(jié)構(gòu)的地方。尤其是進(jìn)行過(guò)程描述或者同時(shí)提出多個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)時(shí),試著把多個(gè)動(dòng)作用同樣的形式表達(dá)出來(lái),一定會(huì)給考官留下思路清晰、語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔的好印象。同學(xué)們不妨一試。
托福寫作句型總結(jié)3
第一, 定語(yǔ)從句。
這應(yīng)該算是寫作中最常用的一種句型之一。適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句可以給你的文章增色不少。
例如,下面的這兩個(gè)句子用上定語(yǔ)從句馬上就變成了一個(gè)漂亮的復(fù)雜句。
Bad books contain evil thoughts. In them, there might be much description about violence, superstition, and sex.
→ Bad books, in which there might be much description about violence, superstition, and sex, contain evil thoughts.
第二, 狀語(yǔ)從句。
在寫作當(dāng)中運(yùn)用的最多的是以下五種狀語(yǔ)從句,即原因狀語(yǔ)從句,讓步狀語(yǔ)從句,條件狀語(yǔ)從句,時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和目的狀語(yǔ)從句。
1. 原因狀語(yǔ)從句:常由because, as, since和for引導(dǎo)
Eg: Nonetheless, I am still in favor of space travel, for its merits far outweigh demerits.
盡管如此,我還是贊成太空探險(xiǎn),因?yàn)樗暮锰庍h(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于壞處。
2. 讓步狀語(yǔ)從句:常由although, though, even though/ if, as long as和notwithstanding引導(dǎo)
Eg: Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.
盡管這一觀點(diǎn)被廣泛接受,很少有證據(jù)表明教育能夠在任何地點(diǎn)、任何年齡進(jìn)行。
3. 條件狀語(yǔ)從句:常由if, on the condition that和providing that引導(dǎo)
Eg: If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions, you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared.
假如你要取得成就或要實(shí)現(xiàn)你的雄心壯志,你必須努力工作、艱苦奮斗、準(zhǔn)備好條件。
4. 時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句:常由when和while引導(dǎo)
Eg: When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.
說(shuō)到教育,大部分人認(rèn)為其是一個(gè)終生的學(xué)習(xí)。
5. 目的狀語(yǔ)從句: 常由so that和in order that引導(dǎo)
Eg: Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills and technology so that they can keep a favorable position in job market.
成千上萬(wàn)的人們不得不花費(fèi)的精力和時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)新的技術(shù)和知識(shí),使得他們?cè)诰蜆I(yè)市場(chǎng)能保持優(yōu)勢(shì)。
第三, 賓語(yǔ)從句。
Eg: Some people claim that government should be mainly responsible for the environmental pollution.
一些人認(rèn)為政府應(yīng)對(duì)環(huán)境污染負(fù)主要責(zé)任。
Eg: Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.
許多專家指出這是現(xiàn)代社會(huì)發(fā)展必然的結(jié)果,無(wú)法避免。
第四, 同位語(yǔ)從句。
Eg: It is an undeniable fact that environmental pollution becomes increasingly serious.
環(huán)境污染變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重是不可否認(rèn)的事實(shí)。
Eg: No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.
沒有人能否認(rèn)這一基本事實(shí):對(duì)于一般工人來(lái)講,輕松掌握這些技術(shù)是不可能的。
第五,主語(yǔ)從句。
Eg: What has caught our attention is /It is noticeable that the environment in both the rural and urban areas is deteriorating.
值得注意的是農(nóng)村和城市的生態(tài)環(huán)境都在不斷惡化。
Eg: It is universally acknowledged that environmental pollution becomes one of the most serious problems in China or even the world as a whole.
眾所周知,環(huán)境污染問(wèn)題是中國(guó)乃至世界面臨的最為嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題之一。
第六,強(qiáng)調(diào)句: It is + 被強(qiáng)調(diào)的內(nèi)容 + that
Eg: It is cars and factories that release a great deal of gases, polluting the environment.
汽車和工廠排放大量的廢氣,使得環(huán)境被污染。
第七,倒裝句。
Eg: Only if the government will take some appropriate measures, will this intractable problem be tackled.
只有政府采取適當(dāng)?shù)?a href='http://www.zbfsgm.com/fwn/cuoshi/' target='_blank'>措施,這個(gè)棘手的問(wèn)題才能被解決。
第八,被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。
Eg: Every means should be tried to protect the environment on which people live.
人們應(yīng)竭盡全力來(lái)保護(hù)我們賴以生存的環(huán)境。
第九, 分詞結(jié)構(gòu):包括現(xiàn)在分詞和過(guò)去分詞。
Eg: Tourism, which is a rising industry, has become the major source of economy, playing crucial role in many Asian countries.
旅游業(yè)是一個(gè)新興的行業(yè),它成為經(jīng)濟(jì)的主要, 在很多東南亞國(guó)家起著尤為重要的作用。
Eg: To be more specific, government should stage some relevant laws or regulations to severely punish the factory producing a great number of pollutants and the people littering or spitting deliberately.
具體來(lái)說(shuō),政府應(yīng)該出臺(tái)相關(guān)法律法規(guī)對(duì)制造大量污染物的工廠及故意亂扔垃圾隨地吐痰的人進(jìn)行嚴(yán)懲。
第十,插入語(yǔ)。
一種獨(dú)立成分,與句子的其它成分一般沒有語(yǔ)法上的關(guān)系,大都是對(duì)一句話作一些附加說(shuō)明或解釋。它通常由一個(gè)詞、一個(gè)短語(yǔ)或一個(gè)句子構(gòu)成,位置較為靈活,可置于句首、句中或句末,一般用逗號(hào)或破折號(hào)與句子隔開。
Eg: Computer, an indispensable part in our life, has brought us great conveniences.
電腦,我們生活中必不可少的一部分,給我們帶來(lái)了極大的方便。
Eg: College students, lacking social experience, are easily cheated.
大學(xué)生,沒有社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn),容易上當(dāng)受騙。
托福寫作句型總結(jié)4
作文中常用句套:
下文中出現(xiàn)的 A,B, “...”(某事物), "sb"( somebody),
要在寫作中要根據(jù)上下文進(jìn)行適當(dāng)替換.
開頭:
When it comes to ..., some think ...
There is a public debate today that ...
A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?
Recentaly the problem has been broughtsintosfocus.
提出觀點(diǎn):
Now there is a growing awareness that...
It is time we explore the truth of ...
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
進(jìn)一步提出觀點(diǎn):
... but that is only part of the history.
Another equally important aspect is ...
A is but one of the many effects. Another is ...
Besides, other reasons are...
提出假想例子的方式:
Suppose that...
Just imagine what would be like if...
It is reasonable to expect...
It is not surprising that...
舉普通例子:
For example(instance),...
... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
A good case in point is...
A particular example for this is...
引用:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...
"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"......". How often we hear such words like there.
講故事
(先說(shuō)故事主體),this story is not rare.
..., such delimma we often meet in daily life.
..., the story still has a realistic significance.
提出原因:
There are many reasons for ...
Why .... , for one thing,...
The answer to this problem involves many factors.
Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...
The first reason can be obiviously seen.
Most people would agree that...
Some people may neglect that in fact ...
Others suggest that...
Part of the explanation is ...
托福寫作句型總結(jié)5
造句要做到準(zhǔn)確、多樣以及高分表達(dá)
I 準(zhǔn)確的句子表達(dá)
1. 句型分析
英語(yǔ)的句型包括以下幾種,簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句、并列句、并列復(fù)合句等。在新托福寫作中,一般使用復(fù)合句,輔以并列句和并列復(fù)合句,當(dāng)然肯定要有簡(jiǎn)單句,做到長(zhǎng)短句相結(jié)合。下面摘抄幾個(gè)句子給大家認(rèn)識(shí)并分析一下復(fù)合句和并列復(fù)合句。
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
這句話是一個(gè)復(fù)合句,由even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。
b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
這句話中是一個(gè)復(fù)合句。with介詞結(jié)構(gòu)中,有一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句對(duì)result進(jìn)行解釋說(shuō)明。
c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
上句話是一個(gè)并列復(fù)雜句。and 連接了兩個(gè)句子,是一個(gè)并列句;because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。
d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
這句話同樣是并列復(fù)雜句。由and連接兩個(gè)句子,成為并列句,再一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。
2. 有問(wèn)題的句子的列舉
考生寫的句子容易出現(xiàn)三個(gè)問(wèn)題:一是使用破碎句,二是使用接連句,三是句子連接不正確。
1). 破碎句
所謂破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是沒有謂語(yǔ)(或者說(shuō)謂語(yǔ)是動(dòng)詞的非謂語(yǔ)形式,如分詞),或者是從句單獨(dú)成句。
破碎句:She singing alone. (無(wú)謂語(yǔ),singing是現(xiàn)在分詞)
正確句:She is singing alone.
破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (從句單獨(dú)成句)
正確句:He did not come because he was sick.
2).接連句
所謂接連據(jù),就是兩個(gè)句子直接連在一起,既未使用連詞,也未使用正確的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。
接連句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3).句子連接不正確
所謂句子連接不正確,就是兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子之間以逗號(hào)連接,這是不合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法的。正確的做法是以連詞、分號(hào)、冒號(hào)、句號(hào)等連接兩個(gè)句子。
不正確句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
正確句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
II 高分表達(dá)
除了在句式上長(zhǎng)短句相結(jié)合準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)外,朗閣海外考試研究中心建議新托??忌褂靡恍┨厥獾木涫?,以使句型多樣化。句型多樣化也是作文得到高分的條件之一。除了我們之前經(jīng)常提到的高分句式,如倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、狀語(yǔ)前置、插入語(yǔ)等,筆者還提出另外一個(gè)句式的多樣變化,即主語(yǔ)多樣化。下面筆者將列舉幾個(gè)句子概括介紹前面四種句型,而重點(diǎn)分析主語(yǔ)多樣化。
正常句: Luck only works in extreme cases.
倒裝句: Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定詞位于句首的倒裝。)
正常句: The internet provides people access to the latest information.
強(qiáng)調(diào)句: It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (強(qiáng)調(diào)the internet)
正常句: The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
狀語(yǔ)前置句: Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
正常句: However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.
插入語(yǔ): New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (連詞however做插入語(yǔ))
主語(yǔ)多樣
1. 她突然想到了一個(gè)主意。
She suddenly had an idea.
通常情況下,考生會(huì)馬上對(duì)這句話進(jìn)行翻譯,基本不會(huì)動(dòng)句子結(jié)構(gòu)。但是以人作為主語(yǔ)的英語(yǔ)句子總是不能夠很吸引人,所以這個(gè)句子如果稍微做下修改,以后面的賓語(yǔ)“主意”做主語(yǔ),這個(gè)句子會(huì)發(fā)生一些變化。
An idea suddenly occurred to her.
2. 他開車心不在焉,幾乎闖禍。
He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an accident.
這句話依然是拿人做主語(yǔ),稍微改一下,把心不在焉這個(gè)形容詞的名詞形式做主語(yǔ),會(huì)大不相同。
His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.
3. 美利堅(jiān)合眾國(guó)創(chuàng)立于1789年。
The United States of America was founded in 1789.
這句話沒有任何錯(cuò)誤,但是不夠多樣,可以用時(shí)間作主語(yǔ)。
The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.
III 實(shí)用句型
在文章的最后,朗閣海外考試研究中心為大家列舉幾個(gè)新托福考試中可以使用的套用句型,為一些寫句子摸不著頭緒的考生提供幫助。
1. It pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.
努力準(zhǔn)備新托福考試是值得的。
2. Nothing is more important than to receive education.
沒有比接受教育更重要的了。
3. The reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.
白領(lǐng)壓力日益增加的原因是他們?cè)谑聵I(yè)上有所追求。
4. It is time the related department took proper measures.
(虛擬句式)相關(guān)部門早該采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧┝恕?/p>
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