托福獨立寫作第一段寫作模板
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托福獨立寫作第一段寫作模板
第一步就是用簡潔明了的句子對原題目的意思進(jìn)行同義替換;
第二步是提出自己的觀點。
這兩大步驟細(xì)化起來可以概括為四句話：
第一句，采用同義替換的方式對原題目的意思進(jìn)行更改，當(dāng)然是“形變神不變”;
第二句，對題目的意思進(jìn)行解釋
第三句，提出自己的觀點;
第四句，概括自己所提出觀點的理由，引起下文。
下面我具體用一些同學(xué)們常犯的毛病題目來解釋這個“兩大步，四個句子”的具體運用方法。
案例1：誤解原意思
Do you agree or disagree： Because people are busy with doing so many things， they can do few things well?
Original：
Some people may hold the view that they are able to do things well even if they are busy with doing so many things simultaneously or during a given period. Although plausible at the first glance， I disagree with the statement. Depending on my own personal experience and personality， I firmly maintain that people can do few things well when they are busy with doing so many things. My arguments of this opinion are listed as follows.
解析：
文章第一句話不是對原題目意思進(jìn)行解釋，而是采用采取了和原意思相反的做法來進(jìn)行題目詮釋;第二句表明自己對誤解題目的觀點;第三句話對自己的觀點進(jìn)行近一步的解釋;第四句一個過渡性的句子。開篇內(nèi)容安排倒是很好，但是作者犯了誤解原題目意思的錯誤導(dǎo)致后面整個文字都做了無用功。
改后：
When people are engaged in a large extent of work simultaneously， they will not be able to perform all of them perfectly. Just imagine how terrible it will be： too many jobs need to be done by the same person in a given time. Once such a picture appears in my mind， I feel dizzy. To me， it is impossible to do everything well with the limited energy and many others factors .Therefore ， I agree with the statement too many things to be done at the same time cause few to be well done . The reasons are as follow.
Revised：
第一句話對原題目意思進(jìn)行了很好的詮釋;第二、三句話進(jìn)一步解釋原題目;第四句話提出自己的觀點;第五句話過渡性句子引起下文。
案例2 ：語言羅嗦，繞彎子給出自己觀點，浪費時間
Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
original：
With the development of science and technology， people’s living standard has been improving day by day. According to the family plan， one couple could have only one child. So child becomes the center of the whole family. Some of them are even spoiled. Therefore， I think it is better if the young adult could live independent from their parents as soon as possible.
解析：
這個開頭看似沒有任何問題，但是仔細(xì)分析就會發(fā)現(xiàn)很多問題。首先，作者繞了個大彎才給出自己的觀點。其次，觀點是對原題目的抄寫，改動的比較少。最后，開篇缺少引起下文的過渡句。更大的錯誤是這個開頭更像是一個全文主要觀點的一個分論點。
Revised：
As we all know， some young adults have the sense of independence in a special period so that they want to choose to live apart from their family， while others still choose to stay with parents in the family. Family can provide young adults a warm bay where he or she could turn to whenever any problems arise. However， considering the sound development of the young adult both mentally and physically， I think to live independently the earlier， the better. Independence is a lesson that each of us must face one day. The detailed reasons are listed below.
解析：
第一句話詮釋原題目意思;第二句話進(jìn)一步解釋第一句話;第三句話提出自己的觀點;第四句話解釋自己的觀點，引出下文。
總而言之，文章開頭的第一段是整篇文章的主基調(diào)，把握好了這個主基調(diào)文章自然會光彩奪目，而如果這個部分出現(xiàn)問題整個文章就會黯然失色。大家在以后的寫作中運用一下這種“兩大步驟，四句話”的托福獨立寫作方法就一定會有所收獲。
托福寫作模板到底應(yīng)該怎么用
在托福寫作當(dāng)中有的同學(xué)認(rèn)為，只要靠考前背幾篇模板就萬事大吉，這也是一個很大的誤區(qū)。很多同學(xué)由于基礎(chǔ)不扎實，除了模板之外需要自己寫的部分往往出現(xiàn)很多錯誤，甚至寫出的文字看起來像是一半是抄襲高逼格，一半是低水平自制。
并且，在一些寫作輔導(dǎo)中心中，許多老師們傾向于傳授學(xué)生寫作內(nèi)容，而非寫作思路。這種培訓(xùn)模式很可能讓學(xué)生適得其反。在今年一月份的香港SAT考試中，幾名來自同一培訓(xùn)機構(gòu)學(xué)生，因使用了統(tǒng)一的作文模板，結(jié)果這幾位學(xué)生的考試成績遲遲沒有公布。焦急的學(xué)生和家長在多次詢問后，終于得到了美國大學(xué)考試委員會的回復(fù)：由于寫作內(nèi)容雷同，幾名學(xué)生被懷疑考場作弊，成績待調(diào)查結(jié)束后再公布，但也有可能取消該次考試成績。但愿這些學(xué)生能最終能涉險過關(guān)，但有些學(xué)生可能要重新參加考試。一旦再次參加考試，他們的試卷要面臨比其他學(xué)生更加嚴(yán)格的審核。對于一些學(xué)生，由于已經(jīng)是最后一次考試機會，他們也因此不得不接受放棄美國留學(xué)的結(jié)局。所以大家要注意，慎用模板。
那么，如何正確使用模板呢?
第一， 強大自己的英語基本功。只有在平時注意積累，注意改正自己的錯誤，才會避免低級錯誤，才會運用正確的語法結(jié)構(gòu)。
第二，動筆之前，一定要認(rèn)真審題，和構(gòu)思，要盡量明確寫作的結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容，然后要要注意看寫作要求，這一點至關(guān)重要。如果沒有認(rèn)真審題的話，見題就寫，沒有嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)膶懽魉悸罚苋菀自斐膳茴}，偏題，不符題意的錯誤，也就不能使模板中的句型和內(nèi)容相匹配。
第三，我們在初練寫作的時候套用模板是正常的事情，也是一個必經(jīng)的過程，只有先試用別人的東西，才能發(fā)現(xiàn)一些漏洞，也才能在此基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行自己的寫作積累。模板要活學(xué)活用，不要一字不差的照抄無誤，而是要根據(jù)自己所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行更改。寫作不一定要字字句句都是難詞，長句，而是要學(xué)會運用一些常見詞的常見短語去表達(dá)，這樣才能真正顯示寫作的水平。這就要求學(xué)生再平時的學(xué)習(xí)中注意積累常用的短語或者詞組，以備寫作之用。另外，關(guān)于寫作素材，不僅僅指寫作常用的詞匯，句型或者語法結(jié)構(gòu)，還要包括所用的事例。因此，在平常的練習(xí)中要注意從閱讀中積累素材，積累詞句，而不要僅僅局限于模板之中。
模板只是給了學(xué)生一個寫作的思路和框架，但是要想獲得高分，就要在框架之上填加自己的內(nèi)容，把模板變成自己的東西，只有文章中有自己的內(nèi)容，才會吸引判卷老師的眼球!
托福寫作必知的一般規(guī)則及常識
1.直接引語中，句首字母要大寫。例如：“Then，”I said，“You havebeen making a mistake，and the letter is not in the apartment.”“那么，”我說，“你準(zhǔn)弄錯了。這封信并不在那棟房子里?！?/p>
2.星期、月份名稱的第一個字母要大寫，但季節(jié)第一個字母不大寫。例如：Sunday星期天，August八月，winter冬天，spring春天。
3.一些大型節(jié)日名稱的第一個實詞的第一字母都要大寫。如：Children‘s Day兒童節(jié)，National Day國慶節(jié)， Teachers’ Day教師節(jié)。
4.由普通名詞構(gòu)成的專有名詞詞組，除其中的冠詞、較短的介詞和連詞外，每個詞的第一字母都要大寫。例如：the Great Wall長城，the UnitedStates美國。
5.大型會議、文件、條約名稱的每個實詞(虛詞：副詞、介詞、連詞、助詞、嘆詞和擬聲詞則不用大寫)的第一個字母都要大寫。書名、報刊名應(yīng)大寫首字母，文章標(biāo)題中的每一個實詞的第一個字母要大寫。
如：China Daily《中國日報》，New York Times《紐約時報》，Their Class《他們的班級》(文章標(biāo)題)，the Warsaw Treaty《華沙條約》， 實例：English Coaching Paper《英語輔導(dǎo)報》。
6.詩歌的每一行的第一個單詞的第一個字母要大寫。
7. 表示稱呼語或職務(wù)的詞首字母要大寫。實例：Mr Green格林先生， Dr Li李博士
托福寫作范文：家人經(jīng)常聚餐是否變得越來越重要?
寫作題目
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Nowadays it is not important for people to have regularly family meals together. 家人經(jīng)常聚餐變得越來越重要了了，是否認(rèn)同?
寫作范文
In the 21st century, there has been dramatic improvement in diverse aspects of people’s lives. However, people are becoming increasingly busy and sometimes are overwhelmed by endless work or study. As a result, less time is devoted into families and people no longer have meals regularly with family members. In my opinion, this is totally mistaken and it is significant for people to eat with family members regularly despite of the change of time. My reasons are as follows.
To begin with, for parents, having regular meals with children can promote parental relationship. Due to people’s busy daily schedules, parents and children tend to have less conversation nowadays. Children spend most of their time learning in school and playing with peers; adults are occupied with their work and socializing with colleagues. The importance of having family meals is ignored. People forget that time spend at the table can be meaningful. For example, parents can discover the problems that their children struggle with. They can provide guidance or inspire children to find out solution by giving them some nice tips. In this way, children can feel the care and love from parents and parents can know about children’s thoughts. It brings mutual benefits.
In addition, for couples, having regular meals can strengthen partners’ relationship. Common sense tells us that as time goes by, passion between lovers decreases. The lack of communication can also result in marriage problems or even serious crises. By spending some quality time with our beloved companion at meal table we can listen and understand each other better. Ensuring at least one meal with our partners a day shows one’s care and how much we value the other person in spite of the busy schedule. Willing to make time for someone is a great way to demonstrate love.
Lastly, for children, it is of great significance to have regular meals with our aging parents. Young people today are busy with their own work and personal life and they often neglect the feelings of the elders. Some may give money regularly to the elder instead of going home to accompany them because they think financial means is a good way to show their love and care. However, according to a survey conducted by Beijing Normal University, after polling tens of thousands of old people, the top priority of their wishes is expecting their sons and daughters to go home regularly and have regular meals with them. The survey also indicates that the elders who are regularly accompanied by their family members tend to live longer and happier.
All in all, considering the essential role that regular eating with families plays on children, companion and the elder, I insist that it is still of great importance for people to eat with families regularly nowadays.
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