托福寫作怎樣寫出好例子
我們?cè)趶?fù)習(xí)備考托福寫作的過程中，熟練的使用各種例子，也是大家必備的技能。那么如何能夠?qū)懗龊美?，為我們的寫作加分?學(xué)習(xí)啦為大家整理了一些技巧和方法，供大家參考。
托福寫作怎樣寫出好例子
例子可以使我們想要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)或者要闡述的概念更加生動(dòng)形象，以使得觀點(diǎn)更加地具有說服力。而且針對(duì)托福寫作來講，考官比較青睞例證比較好的文章。一般來講，在托福的獨(dú)立寫作當(dāng)中，我們常用的例子包括兩種，一種例子是去描述特別具體的某個(gè)人或者某一件事情，這種例子一般比較適合與我們的生活，工作和學(xué)習(xí)緊密相關(guān)的話題。比如“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Keeping old friends is more important than making new friends.”;第二種例子就是假設(shè)一個(gè)一般化的例子，通過假設(shè)一個(gè)場景來說明問題，而這種例子的寫法一般比較適合話題比較大的一些話題，比如“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Land needs to be used to meet human need rather than to protect endangered animals.”今天我們就來展示怎樣把這兩種例子寫好。
01具體的例子
Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The students in university should not do any part-time jobs.
Position: Disagree
Reason: Doing part-time jobs can intensify our social ability.
Exemplification: Take myself for example. When I was a fresh man，I found it really hard to get along with people around me. Then I was advised to take a job as a waiter in the restaurant during which I had chances to communicate with different customers, making them satisfied with my “smile” service. After a year, I myself can realize that I have become more outgoing and understanding.
寫一個(gè)很具體例子的時(shí)候同學(xué)們要注意幾個(gè)問題：
1、不要寫得特別長，寫太多就變成了記敘文，而我們的獨(dú)立寫作是議論文體;
2、這種例子一定要和說理分析性的內(nèi)容結(jié)合在一起才能夠支撐起來一個(gè)主體段。
02假設(shè)性的例子
假設(shè)性的例子有兩點(diǎn)好處。其一就是別人不會(huì)懷疑我們寫的這個(gè)例子的真實(shí)性，二就是假設(shè)性的例子其實(shí)是analytic example，這種伴隨著分析的例子其實(shí)要更符合托福獨(dú)立寫作的風(fēng)格，更能夠體現(xiàn)一個(gè)學(xué)生的分析能力與水平，畢竟議論文的特點(diǎn)就是分析和證明。
Topic：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Land needs to be used to meet human need rather than to protect endangered animals.
Position：Protect endangered animals
Reason: Another important reason to protect endangered animals is that the delicate ecological balance of an area might be irreparably harmed by their extinction.
Exemplification: For example, if humans chop down forests and use the land to grow corn, they might simultaneously destroy the habitats of a kind of bird that eats locusts. The next year because the locust population can grow unchecked, locusts might destroy the entire nearby corn crop. Not only do the birds lose their homes, but humans are also harmed. The ecological balance of many natural habitats is still not well understood and humans interfere in it at their peril.
通過這一段，大家可以看到假設(shè)性的例子的威力。整段文章不長，例子也不多，但是卻非常有效地證明了段首的觀點(diǎn)即保護(hù)生態(tài)平衡的重要性。所以，文章不一定要寫很多，但是一定要寫好，永遠(yuǎn)不要忘了，獨(dú)立寫作的靈魂和核心就是去證明一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的合理性和說服力，所以你用的手段很重要。
新托福寫作例子材料匯總
所謂細(xì)化，就是不要拘泥于單純的題目。一定要進(jìn)行舉例!比如說：獨(dú)立作文題目：Do you agree or disagree the following statement ： Leadership comes naturally： one cannot learn to be a leader。與中國大陸?yīng)毩⒆魑念}目：Some people have ambitious dreams and keep following them， but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. Which do you think is better?
第一個(gè)題目，大家都覺得很空，“領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力”到底該怎么找理由，完全沒有頭緒。第二個(gè)題目，也是一樣的，“具有挑戰(zhàn)性的夢(mèng)想”與“現(xiàn)實(shí)的目標(biāo)”感覺遠(yuǎn)不如老托福里面的“是否建立工廠”好想理由。
但是如果我們對(duì)于領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力進(jìn)行舉例，我們自然而然的就會(huì)想到喬布斯，絕對(duì)是一個(gè)超偉大的大企業(yè)家，喬布斯有什么過人的能力呢。1 創(chuàng)新能力，否則不會(huì)有iphone與ipad; 2 審美能力，否則Mac的字體不會(huì)那么漂亮，iphone也不會(huì)那么完美 ;3 堅(jiān)韌不拔的能力，否則也不會(huì)建立皮克斯東山再起。再來想創(chuàng)新能力，我們可以通過旅游來獲得，什么可以通過學(xué)習(xí)來獲得，堅(jiān)韌可以通過體育來獲得。到這，不也就找到了寫作的方向了么。
托福作文備考找理由，切忌就事論事，其實(shí)只要我們大膽的進(jìn)行舉例，然后需要的時(shí)候，再適當(dāng)提煉，其實(shí)作文思路是非常好尋找的。就像給姑娘寫情書的時(shí)候，你也不能只寫我愛你，還一定要寫“不看你的眼，不看你的眉，看的時(shí)候心里跳，看過以后眼淚垂，不看你的眼，不看你的 眉，不看你也愛上你，忘了我是誰”這里的眼與眉不都是舉例么。
托福作文畫龍點(diǎn)睛需要六步
1 首先關(guān)于篇幅：請(qǐng)大家務(wù)必要把作文的長度保持在300字以上，最好能有400字左右。
2 其次是你文章的文體格式(style)：是不是按照ETS所要求的論文體(academic)來寫的。
3 看你在文章中是否有修辭：大家不妨在文章中使用排比、擬人、比喻等修辭手法，甚至引用和倒裝這樣的假修辭都會(huì)是你的加分法寶。
4 要注意你關(guān)鍵句的句型：關(guān)鍵句是指首段觀點(diǎn)句、理由段首句和結(jié)論段首句。關(guān)鍵句一定要使用復(fù)雜句，最好是使用我上課時(shí)曾經(jīng)分析過的倒裝句或強(qiáng)調(diào)句。
5 用詞是否多樣化：同一意思盡量用不同的詞來表達(dá)而不要重復(fù)。
6 看你的例子是否完美支持中心思想，這一點(diǎn)是最近才提出的，也是考生們比較難把握的，我建議大家平時(shí)多看托福寫作題庫，結(jié)合多思考，多搜集話題，爭取做到爛熟于胸。
托福寫作二十一個(gè)失分點(diǎn)
1. 托福寫作段落過長，不分段主語與動(dòng)詞一致問題She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主語和動(dòng)詞在數(shù)方面不一致。
2.文章結(jié)構(gòu)不平行：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.當(dāng)使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯(lián)接起來的時(shí)候，應(yīng)當(dāng)使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語。
3.不知所云：Many companies began using computers mouth.
4.句子別扭We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.措辭過長或不清。換言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用縮寫在正式的寫作中。不要使用縮寫形式(can’t，don’t，it’s，we’ll，they’ve等等)，而應(yīng)當(dāng)使用單詞的完整形式(cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。
6.關(guān)聯(lián)詞語重復(fù)Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不能在該句的主要主語和主要?jiǎng)釉~前使用連詞。
7.句子不完整Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to gets into college. For example, my friend in high school.句子沒有主要主語或主要?jiǎng)釉~，因?yàn)槠鋵?shí)它應(yīng)是一個(gè)從句。這是一個(gè)非常常見的錯(cuò)誤，修改的方法是將兩個(gè)句子連接起來。
8.書寫難以辨認(rèn)信息不正確I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.傳的信息不正確，或者讓人聽起來覺得可能不正確(如果確實(shí)是正確的，應(yīng)當(dāng)解釋為什么這樣，因?yàn)樽x者不認(rèn)為是正確的)。上述例句中，all的意 思是百分之百;我們不能絕對(duì)地說每一件新東西都是從美國誕生的。為保險(xiǎn)起見，應(yīng)當(dāng)使用many或most。非英語單詞Computers are very helpful and advantageable.盡管看起來象個(gè)單詞，其實(shí)不是，至少不是個(gè)英文單詞。使用這個(gè)單詞的另一種形式。
9.介詞多余I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示這種意思時(shí)此單詞不能與介詞連用。這種情況常見于downtown，home，there，here等詞。這些詞語在英語中是副詞而非名詞，因而不能在它們前面添加介詞。
10.跑題或不相關(guān)There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.這個(gè)意思與okay for children to fail sometimes.所表達(dá)的意思很普通大多數(shù)人都已經(jīng)知道到了，因而就沒有必要再說出來。
11.標(biāo)點(diǎn)問題I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.這是一個(gè)非常普遍的問題!許多學(xué)生在句子中使用了太多的句號(hào)，尤其是當(dāng)他們用手寫的時(shí)候。
12.重復(fù)冗余Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.一種意思的表述不止一次，或者某個(gè)詞語不必要。
13.單數(shù)/復(fù)數(shù)Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.單詞需要從單數(shù)變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)，或者由復(fù)數(shù)變成單數(shù)。單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞不能單獨(dú)使用，應(yīng)該將其變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式或者加上限定詞(a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,等等)。
14.拼寫錯(cuò)誤主語、動(dòng)詞或賓語有問題I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本結(jié)構(gòu)有問題 缺少主語、動(dòng)詞或賓語，或者這些成分重復(fù)。
15.語氣與文章不符I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.語氣與文章其他部分不相符可能是過于正式或者太不正式。
16.代詞指代不明If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代詞所指代的指示詞(介詞所代替的名詞)不清楚。
17.過于籠統(tǒng)We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse. 句子或它所表達(dá)的意思過于籠統(tǒng)，不能提供多少信息。
18.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)不正確檢查一下是應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過去時(shí)、將來時(shí)還是完成時(shí)等等。
19.選詞不恰當(dāng)I was late getting home because I lost my way.在這種情況下不應(yīng)該使用該詞可選擇更好的詞語或者所使用的詞語與文章的總體語氣不符。
20.單詞形式不當(dāng)I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.所使用的單詞的形式不正確檢查一下應(yīng)該使用該詞的名詞、形容詞或副詞形式的哪一種。
21.用詞錯(cuò)誤Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.用詞錯(cuò)誤或在此種情況下該詞不是最佳用詞。
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