高考英語(yǔ)作文高分必背

　　如何寫(xiě)好一篇滿分的英語(yǔ)作文呢?下面是學(xué)習(xí)啦小編網(wǎng)絡(luò)整理的高考英語(yǔ)作文高分必背以供大家學(xué)習(xí)。

　　高考英語(yǔ)作文高分必背(一)

　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)等較好的句式表達(dá)。

　　高考英語(yǔ)作文高分必背(二)

　　Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

　　The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

　　We were tired but happy.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本情景作文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.討論;2.爬山;3.檢拾別人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。本文覆蓋了所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。其中，寫(xiě)作主題突出，詳略得當(dāng)，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，而且有效的使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全文機(jī)構(gòu)緊湊。本文敘述清楚，描寫(xiě)細(xì)致，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用了很多富有表現(xiàn)力的詞和句型，例如：“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，將活動(dòng)的情形很形象地描述了出來(lái)。

　　高考英語(yǔ)作文高分必背(三)

　　Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

　　Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

　　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single?person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double? person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　　Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，首先點(diǎn)明了主旨。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是應(yīng)用了很多比較復(fù)雜的句式，使文章比較出彩。開(kāi)頭使用了獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)交代賓館位置。which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句的使用也很正確?？偟貋?lái)說(shuō)，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯(cuò)的滿分作文。

　　高考英語(yǔ)作文高分必背(四)

　　Dear Amy,

　　I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點(diǎn)評(píng)]

　　本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)。文章使用了高中常見(jiàn)的句式，如I?m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比較好。作者對(duì)定語(yǔ)從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學(xué)習(xí)。

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　　好詞1.realize v.意識(shí)到2.promise v.允諾3.donate v.捐贈(zèng)

　　好句1、I?m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain.

　　我很遺憾地得知你身患肺癌，給你帶來(lái)了巨大的痛苦。

　　好處：which引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句。

　　2、So, stand up and fight against the disease!

　　因此，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地與疾病做斗爭(zhēng)吧!

　　好處：擲地有聲，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。