編者按：根據(jù)同學(xué)們的反饋，大家對(duì)如何快速地完成一篇高分范文很有疑問，在短時(shí)間內(nèi)如何構(gòu)思一篇邏輯性和結(jié)構(gòu)都非常棒的作文成為廣大同學(xué)們的難題，如何避免“想哪寫哪”的問題，Lynn就拿著篇為例教大家如何構(gòu)思并且快速列好提綱：

　　第一段——介紹段(Introduction)

　　同意或不同意類，只能寫一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，想好自己的觀點(diǎn)。

　　切忌直接抄題目，嘗試改寫(paraphrase)題目。

　　想一句背景句(background)承接自己的觀點(diǎn)。

　　列出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

　　第二段——主體段1 (Main Body 1)

　　背景句(topic sentence)

　　小觀點(diǎn)1

　　小觀點(diǎn)2

　　第三段——主體段2 (Main Body 2)

　　(類似主體段1)

　　第四段——總結(jié)(Conclusion )

　　簡(jiǎn)單列舉一下主體段中提到的觀點(diǎn)。

　　綜上所述，提綱如下(草稿)：

　　Introduction：

　　controversial

　　a large number of people...support

　　agree, benefits

　　Main Body 1：

　　ts：There is no denying that social responsibility can enhance the reputation and profitability.

　　information media+positive impression

　　government support

　　Main Body 2:

　　ts: In addition, the fact that undertaking social responsibilities needs high costs may be the most typical reason unaccepted by business men.

　　inprofitable+inability to survive

　　unfair

　　Conclusion:

　　re-state the opinion listing opinions.

　　我的范文：

　　The issue regarding whether making money is the most important goal of businesses is controversial. There are a large number of people who support that businesses should also undertake social responsibilities. Personally, taking social responsibilities is capable of bringing two main benefits despite some existing drawbacks.

　　There is no denying that social responsibility can enhance the reputation and profitability. First, information spread is getting fast since rapid development of information media, which implies that any contribution from enterprises could be easily recognized by public. Thus, this would drive people to form a positive impression to these enterprises, thereby increasing their sales volume. Second, most socially responsible investments are government-supported. Empirically, businesses in purpose of enhancing social welfare, such as infrastructure construction and philanthropy, can gain government financing. Because it can alleviate the burden of government, so that to solve the problems about insufficient fund as well as promote the corporate image.

　　In addition, the fact that undertaking social responsibilities needs high costs may be the most typical reason unaccepted by business men. As known, profitability is the key index of enterprises based on adequate normal profits. Hence, overemphasized social responsibilities might cause companies’ inability to survive. Moreover, this requirement may be considered as unfair treatment to small companies. In contrast to large companies, most small entities are self-sustaining and rely on profits to further develop. Nevertheless, large companies with abundant capitals enable to invest some of funds on public utilities even if unprofitable, as they can treat these funds as advertising fees for corporate image and goodwill.

　　In conclusion, undertaking social responsibilities is beneficial to enterprises, which mainly embodies on two aspects: enhance of reputation and government supporting. However, the contradiction with profitability should not be neglected, it affects some small companies significantly.

　　作者| Lynn

　　公眾號(hào)： 雅思寫作王

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