想要體高英語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)作水平在原有的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行修改提升是非常有效的辦法，下面小編就跟你們分享下怎么修改英語(yǔ)作文

 

　　一、英語(yǔ)作文的等級(jí)

 

　　四檔文：內(nèi)容不完整，語(yǔ)言表述錯(cuò)誤很多，不能完整地表達(dá)思想?？傻?-2分

 

　　三檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點(diǎn)描述合理，但表述不充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)不合理，語(yǔ)言不夠流暢，字跡不夠工整，5-6  處語(yǔ)法或拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤；字?jǐn)?shù)不足?？傻?-5分

 

　　二檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點(diǎn)描述比較充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰，語(yǔ)言比較流暢，字跡工整，有3-4處語(yǔ)法或拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求?？傻?-8分

 

　　一檔文：內(nèi)容完整，重點(diǎn)描述清楚、合理，表達(dá)充分，層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，字跡工整，可讀性強(qiáng)，語(yǔ)言流暢，僅有1-2處語(yǔ)法或拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤；字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求?？傻?-10分

　　二、英語(yǔ)作文修改案例

 

　　案例一：

 

　　A Trip to the Zoo

 

　　原稿：

 

　　Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo. I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos. That’s a interesting trip. I’ll never forget it. That’s  my trip.

 

　　修改后：

 

　　It was a sunny Sunday  After a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus. This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone. Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!

 

　　As soon as I got there,  I was attracted at once.  Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily. Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands. How naughty they were! What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers. They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy. Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world .we are family . I t came to my mind immiediatly.

 

　　Anyway, I had an interesting trip today . It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.

 

　　案例二：

 

　　My favourite season

 

　　原稿：

 

　　There are four seasons in a year. And my favourite season is summer. Although it’s very hot. I still love it .Because I can swim in the sea .And lie in sun . That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer. That’s  very intersting. So I love summer. That’s my favourite season.

 

　　修改后

 

　　My favourite season

 

　　As is all know , there are four seasons. Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.

 

　　Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach  … How comfortable ! More importantly  I can eat delicious Icecream . Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside. And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father .

 

　　In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness .

 

　　三、英語(yǔ)作文修改的注意事項(xiàng)

 

　　1、整篇文章邏輯的修改.作文的目的是為了表達(dá)東西,所以首先要確保作文表達(dá)的內(nèi)容是清楚并且符合邏輯的,如果段落之間都是矛盾的就說(shuō)不過(guò)去了.

 

　　2、語(yǔ)法的修改篇章與段落的修改過(guò)后看句子的結(jié)構(gòu),說(shuō)仔細(xì)了就是語(yǔ)法的修改.

 

　　3、還有就是單詞拼寫(xiě)等小細(xì)節(jié)的修改了.