如何寫(xiě)出英語(yǔ)高分作文
如何寫(xiě)出英語(yǔ)高分作文
英語(yǔ)作文是一項(xiàng)綜合能力的考試,主要是考學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語(yǔ)法和句子結(jié)構(gòu)以及連句成文的掌握程度。筆者認(rèn)為,要想讓學(xué)生在規(guī)定的30分鐘內(nèi)寫(xiě)出一篇較好的作文,教師應(yīng)該在平時(shí)的課堂教學(xué)中認(rèn)真指導(dǎo)學(xué)生注重審題、切題、連貫通順、語(yǔ)法正確、語(yǔ)言規(guī)范這五個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)。本文旨在談?wù)勗趯?xiě)出英語(yǔ)高分作文這個(gè)方面的具體作法。
如何寫(xiě)出英語(yǔ)高分作文
一、寫(xiě)作訣竅
總體把握,要點(diǎn)齊全;人稱時(shí)態(tài),邏輯清楚;
關(guān)鍵詞匯,動(dòng)詞第一;組詞成句,結(jié)構(gòu)完整;
組句成文,連詞增色;此路不通,繞道迂回;
字跡工整,留好印象;從句適量,高分有望。
二、寫(xiě)作步驟
1.認(rèn)真審題。審題包括要點(diǎn)、格式、詞數(shù)以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息,告誡讀者什么(即寫(xiě)作目的)。
2.確定文體和時(shí)態(tài)。確定文體后,根據(jù)不同文體的特點(diǎn)和要求進(jìn)行組織材料;同時(shí)確定出該篇文章的總時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)態(tài)的變化。
3.寫(xiě)完要點(diǎn),但不隨意發(fā)揮。
4.先草稿,后抄寫(xiě)。
三、習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)
[2004年全國(guó)中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)能力競(jìng)賽初賽初三組] (14分)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.
﹒what exactly your hobby is;
﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby;
﹒why you enjoy your hobby;
﹒about your hopes and plans for the future.
寫(xiě)作要求:
1. 根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)拓展想象空間,靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。
2. 條理清楚,語(yǔ)句通順,書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰、規(guī)范。
3. 詞數(shù)60-80。
[學(xué)生習(xí)作a]
My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old .
I became interested in reading books. I like needing books
Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn
a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me
how to be a good person . Books even can solve many
problems for me . I will read more good books to improve
myself.
①改為reading books,動(dòng)詞作表語(yǔ)時(shí)應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞。
?、赼lso的位置應(yīng)放在can之后。
[點(diǎn)評(píng)]:檔次9-11分。
①要點(diǎn)不全,漏掉最后一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。
?、诰渥踊緹o(wú)誤,能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢,句子與句子之間過(guò)渡不自然,給讀者感覺(jué)在回答上述① ② ③問(wèn)題。
③有少量錯(cuò)誤。
[學(xué)生習(xí)作b]
My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable .
When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before
I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting
that I always felt they weren't enough . So I began to read
books by myself .little by little I became interested in
reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting
things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the
beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my
writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study
hard and read more books so that my dream can come true .