如何讓英語作文有亮點(diǎn)
書面表達(dá)就是用書面的形式進(jìn)行語言交際,它和口頭表達(dá)不同。它不能隨意發(fā)揮,也不能逐字逐句地翻譯所給的提示或參考材料,必須根據(jù)題目的要求和所給的情景進(jìn)行表達(dá),而且敘述議論必須明了得當(dāng),語言要準(zhǔn)確,要符合書面語的規(guī)則。下面是學(xué)習(xí)啦小編整理的讓英語作文有亮點(diǎn)的方法,以供大家學(xué)習(xí)參考。
如何讓英語作文有亮點(diǎn)
一、遣詞貼切準(zhǔn)確
1.詞義準(zhǔn)確
例1:這個(gè)男人的病情危險(xiǎn)。
誤:The man is dangerous.(這個(gè)人是個(gè)危險(xiǎn)分子。)
正:The man is seriously ill.
2.詞性適當(dāng)
例2:她做的實(shí)驗(yàn)獲得了成功。
正:She succeeded in carrying out the experiment.
正:She was successful in carrying out the experiment.
3.搭配無誤
例3:我突然想到一個(gè)好主意。
正:Suddenly I thought up a good idea.
正:A good idea occurred to/struck/hit me.
二、造句靈活多變
1.熟用it句型
例4:In our daily life,it is essential for us to form some good habits.
it句型還有很多,同學(xué)們?cè)谌粘懽饔?xùn)練中,如果能有意識(shí)地正確使用it句型,那么會(huì)為文章增添不少色彩。
2.學(xué)用復(fù)合句
比較適宜使用復(fù)合句的兩種情況:
(1)簡(jiǎn)單句較多時(shí)
例5:Eighteen years ago,when Lin Shuhao was a little boy,he began playing basketball. He had gone through many hardships since he graduated from Harvard in 2011. But he trained himself as hard as possible,which led him to be a famous basketball player.
使用復(fù)合句使前后的句子形成一個(gè)有機(jī)的整體,讀起來順暢自然。
(2)連接上下文時(shí)
例6:Mr. John taught us how to learn English. What he said left deep impression on me. We’ve decided to speak more English in daily life because spoken English is very important in communication.
使用復(fù)合句使句子之間關(guān)系緊湊、一氣呵成。
3.會(huì)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句
例7:It was your kindness and your money that helped me to go back to my senior high school.
此句中強(qiáng)調(diào)句的運(yùn)用使得作者的情感表現(xiàn)得更加強(qiáng)烈。同學(xué)們只要掌握了強(qiáng)調(diào)句的基本結(jié)構(gòu),并在寫作時(shí)熟練地運(yùn)用,就能大大增強(qiáng)文章的感染力。
4.巧用非謂語動(dòng)詞
同學(xué)們?nèi)裟芮‘?dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用非謂語動(dòng)詞對(duì)簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)換,就會(huì)使句子讀起來更加形象、生動(dòng),從而傳遞出不同語境下的不同內(nèi)涵。如:
例8:Moved by the English teacher’s words,we were determined to study hard.
例9:With so much work to do,I have no time for a holiday.
三、謀篇連貫順暢
同學(xué)們要恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用平時(shí)積累下來的連接詞或過渡性短語來表示句與句之間、段與段之間的邏輯關(guān)系,以使文章連貫、緊湊、自然、流暢。
例10:As we all know,vocabulary is the basis of a language. So mastering a number of words is of vital importance,which no doubt is beneficial to our writing. Besides,it’s necessary and useful for us to read beautiful English articles. Last but not the least,practice makes perfect.