如何寫(xiě)出英語(yǔ)高分作文的方法(2)
如何寫(xiě)出英語(yǔ)高分作文的方法
五、多實(shí)少虛原則
寫(xiě)文章應(yīng)該寫(xiě)一些實(shí)際的東西,不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞。這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說(shuō)很好的時(shí)候,不應(yīng)該只說(shuō)nice這樣空洞的詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如:
走出房間,general的詞是:walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):slip out of the room
小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):dance out of the room
老人走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō):stagger out of the room
所以多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞,文章將會(huì)大放異彩!
六、多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯(lián))
都希望寫(xiě)下很長(zhǎng)的句子,像個(gè)老外似的,可就是怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò),怎么辦,最保險(xiǎn)的寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句的方法就是在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。
比如說(shuō): I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式:Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短語(yǔ)可以用:besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)
寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候,在要點(diǎn)之前先寫(xiě)點(diǎn)別的,注意二者之間的聯(lián)系就夠了。
For example:
The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
The coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短語(yǔ):despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, not with standing
3)因果(so, so, so)
講故事的時(shí)候要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見(jiàn)了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!
The snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短語(yǔ):then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)
文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語(yǔ)從句,表語(yǔ)從句,賓語(yǔ)從句的變形。
舉例:This is what I can do.
Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分:
When to go, Why he goes away…
5)附加(多此一舉)
在寫(xiě)作時(shí),用上定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ),效果會(huì)更好。
The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.
其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單,同位語(yǔ)要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成;定語(yǔ)從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中,但是whom or that 關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此,引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句,一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句,一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式,一個(gè)個(gè)地詞,一個(gè)個(gè)的短語(yǔ),如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)!
Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.
Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. (氣勢(shì)恢宏)
要想寫(xiě)出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則
既然是挑戰(zhàn)極限,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在學(xué)生的文章中,很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子,其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單,只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì),它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語(yǔ)一致,而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如:
The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.
Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.